Time Travel Revisited

So a dear friend and long time reader of this blog pointed out that there was an error in my time travel story - I had accidentally included a page twice (NOT a literary device). So here's the updated version:

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I should make it clear that there are time travel stories that are good. To be clear, these are exceptions to the rule. 

Exceptions include:
Back to the Future
About Time
Groundhog Day

Terrible time travel stories:
Looper
...
I'm not actually going to add to this list. They're all just bad.